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The positioning statement and messages

Fix the position in one internal sentence (for whom, which shelf, one difference, the proof), build a message hierarchy for the payer, the user and those who recommend, draft variants with AI and check them, then write Dana's profile line and pinned post.

~9 min read · 9 exercises · 250 points

Before you start

So what's the slogan?

Still on Klasna's marketing team: you have a shelf for EU parents, a difference and its proof, and Leo already wants a slogan. This lesson fixes them first in one internal sentence, builds the messages under it, and then does the same in miniature for Dana's own tutoring profile.

The positioning statement: an internal sentence, not an ad

Once you have a shelf, a difference and proof, the team needs them in one place, written the same way for everyone. That place is the positioning statement: one internal sentence that says for whom, on which shelf, the one difference that counts and the proof behind it.

It is not a slogan. A slogan has to be short and catchy; the statement has to be exact. Nobody outside the team reads it. Its job is to be the source every ad, page, profile and sales script is written from, and the test they are checked against: does this line speak to these people, on this shelf, about this difference, with proof we have?

That is why the order matters. When Leo asks "so what's the slogan?", the answer is "not yet": first the statement, then the slogan grows out of the difference. A slogan written before the statement tends to describe whatever the writer likes, not the position the team chose.

  • Do
    Write the statement first; derive the slogan from its difference.
  • Don't
    Start with a catchy slogan and work out the position later.

    The slogan then describes taste, not the chosen position.

The four parts, in order

The statement has four parts, and this course writes them in a fixed order:

  1. For whom: the segment and its need.
  2. The frame of reference: which shelf.
  3. The one difference that counts.
  4. The proof behind it.

Whom you serve comes first, because the shelf and the difference only make sense for them. The proof closes the sentence, so nobody can write a claim the team can't show.

Uliana's draft: "For Ukrainian parents in the EU who want their children to keep up maths and English for a return or the Ukrainian exam, Klasna is Ukrainian school subjects online with a personal tutor at hours that fit their time zone, where the tutor writes to parents every week about what changed. Proof: a real anonymised note and parents' reviews."

It is long on purpose. Each part is checkable on its own: is this the segment we chose, the shelf we tested, the difference that passed the four checks, proof we actually have?

  • Do
    "For [segment and need], Klasna is [shelf], where [difference]. Proof: [evidence]."
  • Don't
    A statement with no proof part.

    Without it, any claim can slip into the ads.

The message hierarchy: one main message, a line for each role

Under the statement sits a message hierarchy: one main message, two or three supporting messages for the different people in the purchase, and proof under each.

For Klasna and EU parents:

  • The parent, who pays and decides: "Every week, you'll know what changed." The payer hears the main message first. Proof: a sample note.
  • The child, who studies: reached through the parent and in the lessons, never by ads aimed at minors. The parent gets a line to pass on: a friendly tutor who explains the Ukrainian programme step by step. Proof: a short trial lesson.
  • The people who recommend: admins of community chats and other parents. A sample note they can share is easier to pass on than a link to prices.

The hierarchy keeps everyone on one story. Each role hears what matters to them, but all of it comes back to the same difference.

  • Do
    Parent: "Every week, you'll know what changed." Child, via the parent: a friendly tutor, a trial lesson.
  • Don't
    Run ads aimed at 12-year-olds so the child asks the parent.

    Children are reached through parents and lessons, never by ads aimed at minors.

One main promise in every channel

A common slip is to tailor the main promise to each channel: "AI practice 24/7" in a video ad, "qualified tutors" in search, "weekly progress notes" on the landing page. Each line might test well where it runs, but together they tell parents three different stories about who Klasna is.

The rule is the opposite. The main message stays the same everywhere; each channel says it in its own words and format. A short video can show a parent reading the weekly note on the phone; a search ad can say "Weekly notes from your child's tutor"; the landing page can show a real anonymised note. Different words, one promise.

What may change by channel is the supporting line and the proof you lead with, because each channel reaches a different role at a different moment. A parent who sees the same promise in three places starts to remember it; a parent who sees three promises remembers none of them.

  • Do
    Search ad: "Weekly notes from your child's tutor." Video: a parent reading the note.
  • Don't
    "AI practice 24/7" in video, "qualified tutors" in search, "weekly notes" on the page.

    Three stories; parents remember none.

Drafting messages with AI, checking them against the statement

An AI assistant is good at what is slow for people: ten variants of a main message in a minute. Choosing among them is still your job, and the statement is the tool.

Run every variant through four questions: is it for these parents, on this shelf, about this difference, and can we prove it today? Uliana's favorite, "Europe's most trusted Ukrainian school", fails the last one: nobody can show it. "Unlock your child's full potential with AI" moves Klasna back to the app shelf. "Learning, reimagined" says nothing at all. "Every week, your child's tutor tells you what changed" comes straight from the difference and can be shown today.

Then compare the survivors with the words parents used in their reviews. Customers' words usually beat the team's: they are concrete and they sound like the people reading the ad. Polished AI wording often sounds like every other school.

  • Do
    Ask for ten variants, keep only those that pass the statement, compare them with review wording.
  • Don't
    "Europe's most trusted Ukrainian school": it sounds great.

    It can't be proven today, so it fails the statement.

What to give an AI assistant, and what not

To draft good messages, the assistant needs context: the positioning statement, the segment, the difference, and what customers praise. It does not need anyone's personal data.

  • Give it: the statement, the review themes and counts ("weekly note 46, patient tutor 31"), short phrases parents use with names removed, the channel and the length you need.
  • Don't give it: whole reviews with parents' names, real weekly notes about named children, CRM exports with contacts. Pasting them into a tool sends personal data to an outside provider, often with no agreement on how it is stored or used.

The rule of thumb: share the pattern, not the person. The assistant can't write better because it knows a child's name, so there is no reason to give it one. If a task truly needs personal data, it needs a lawful basis and an agreement with the provider first; for drafting ad copy, it never does.

  • Do
    "Review themes: weekly note 46, patient tutor 31. Write 10 main messages for EU parents."
  • Don't
    Paste all 120 reviews with parents' names and ask for slogans.

    Personal data goes to an outside tool for no gain.

A one-person practice: the profile line is the statement squeezed

A solo practice needs the same thinking in a smaller space. Its shop window is often one profile line and one pinned post.

Dana, a Klasna English tutor with her own evening practice for adults, has a niche: people in IT who need English for work calls. Her statement, in short: for people in IT who freeze on client calls, a tutor who practises on your own real calls and emails, in the evenings. Proof: her students' words.

The profile line is that statement squeezed into who, what changes and how: "English for work calls, for people in IT. We practise on your real calls. Evenings, online." Compare her old line, "English teacher | all levels | DM for lessons": one offer for everyone, so nobody feels it is for them. "Fluent English in 30 days, guaranteed!" promises what she can't show, and "Passionate about languages and travel" is about her, not the student.

A profile line passes the same test as any message: the right people, the right shelf, the difference, proof she has.

  • Do
    "English for work calls, for people in IT. We practise on your real calls. Evenings, online."
  • Don't
    "English teacher | all levels | DM for lessons"

    For everyone, so for nobody in particular.

The pinned post: honest proof and a "not for" line

The pinned post carries what the profile line can't: the reader's situation, how lessons work, one piece of proof, who it isn't for, and how to book.

Two rules keep it honest. First, show results, don't promise them. "No more freezing on calls in a month" is a promise to every reader that Dana can't guarantee, so it misleads. A real student's result, in their words and with permission, is honest and still shows what is possible: "after six weeks I ran my first client call alone."

Second, say who it isn't for. "No exam prep for school students" saves time for both sides, sharpens the position, and keeps Dana clear of Klasna's families, which her agreement with Klasna requires.

How it fits together: the statement fixes whom, which shelf, which difference and what proof; messages and profile lines are written from it and checked against it. The module's case applies all of it to Klasna Club, which parents file as a chatbot you pay for, and tests a new position cheaply.

  • Do
    "After six weeks I ran my first client call alone." (a student, quoted with permission)
  • Don't
    "Fluent on calls in a month, guaranteed."

    A promise to everyone she can't keep for everyone.

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